The suggestion of intimacy at the end was sexy as hell. This phrase melted me EM like hot velvet.
Loved the edgy tension between the two, and the strong sense of their moral ambiguity, and the description of Jazz's open show of emotion, and Prowl, hiding his deep, but being kept alive by them. Prowl hammered emotions down, like plates of metal. He could be in a towering white-hot fury and look, and sound, and think…the same. I so love the elegent way you phrase your descriptions, saying so much in so few words.
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Date: 2011-12-31 02:27 am (UTC)Loved the edgy tension between the two, and the strong sense of their moral ambiguity, and the description of Jazz's open show of emotion, and Prowl, hiding his deep, but being kept alive by them. Prowl hammered emotions down, like plates of metal. He could be in a towering white-hot fury and look, and sound, and think…the same. I so love the elegent way you phrase your descriptions, saying so much in so few words.