Fantastic fight sequence! Enough description to easily visualize the action (which is great!) and yet your writing's so smooth that it doesn't interrupt the emotional flow.
And I adore how you write Starscream--possessive, arrogant, and at the same time an actual leader who takes responsibility--and Barricade, who so desperately wants something to believe in when he can't believe in his own worth. This is just lovely.
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Date: 2011-02-05 06:14 pm (UTC)And I adore how you write Starscream--possessive, arrogant, and at the same time an actual leader who takes responsibility--and Barricade, who so desperately wants something to believe in when he can't believe in his own worth. This is just lovely.