Well, Wing is honestly not trying to be creepy (I've written way more creepy creepers)--he's actually more sexually innocent, in a way, and honestly doesn't quite know what to do with what he's feeling, so his manipulations are unintentional and not malicious and are as much his attempt to try to figure out how to channel his own desire as to get anything from Drift. He's in his own way as terrible at relationships as Deadlock is, and doesn't know how to express desire.
Compare him with how I've written Bay'wave/Prowl in the past, or even Ironhide/Bluestreak, I see a much more disturbing power-over trend with those than Wing, who's actually not even entirely in control of himself. Which might be the creepy part, now that I think about it.
Again, creepy was not my intent. Vulnerable, intense and clumsy is sort of what I was going for. I'm sorry I missed the mark.
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Date: 2011-01-23 02:10 pm (UTC)Compare him with how I've written Bay'wave/Prowl in the past, or even Ironhide/Bluestreak, I see a much more disturbing power-over trend with those than Wing, who's actually not even entirely in control of himself. Which might be the creepy part, now that I think about it.
Again, creepy was not my intent. Vulnerable, intense and clumsy is sort of what I was going for. I'm sorry I missed the mark.